shadows from the day, dust laden
tied loosely to the sound of footfall
enter the house.
The shadows dissemble and spill
over the house, even to the unkempt bed.
The moonlight is caught in the bars
of the window sill, etched on the wall.
silently you walkout into the
widening expanse of the white light.
well done friend, loved it! beautiful combination of words.keep it up! ! !
The imagery you used just fit to build a nice house...but a house in poetry only hahahaha...joking, nice one Subodh..write more! _Unwritten Soul
My favorite so far.....I liked the ending (I would recommend splitting that last line after expanse so that you don't end a line on an article) .
I like your imagery :)
beautiful poem. great word choice. a job well done, friend!
I love it, that it is short, but says the thought. Keep on, do it for yourself, be happy that you did a good job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully written. How nicely you have made one to move silently from the beautiful house to the vast universe! Great write.