Stones Are Melting In Sky Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Stones Are Melting In Sky

Rating: 5.0


Such heavy stones are flying,
Amazing here trees are crying.
Dying grasses mind is buying,
Water in chest is space lying.

Stones are melting in sky, feel,
This provokes thought and zeal.
Time moves in wheel in new deal,
Emotions soon mind here does peel.

Stones are melting by love touch,
Doves are kissing sky very much.
We see flow of love in far clutch,
Amazing tale this is true as such.

Light here sees sun is supplying,
All rivers are here to fly trying.
Rays are here in shore sand frying,
See! Such heavy stones are flying.

Monday, October 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,life and death,nature,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Emotions peels here mind. Love makes melt to very hard stones. Stones fly in sky and by seeing trees cry. Such theme expresses deep emotion. This poem is written in Deopgarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 05 October 2015

I am sure that the original thoughts, before being translated into English were even more beautiful but I enjoyed this poem thoroughly anyway. Thanks

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David Wood 05 October 2015

Love makes even the hardest stones (hearts) melt. Lovely enjoyable poem.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

I reviewed this outstanding poem this morning, seems got deleted anyways, I got the opportunity to read it once again, Sublime and everything gets summed up in a single line: Stones are melting in sky by love touch............10++++

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 05 October 2015

It is only a poetic heart which can witness things usually average people can not see happening. Poet also capable of making others too see things like stones are flying, trees are crying and so forth. That's how a poet becomes unique. Great job Kumar. Enjoyed. +10.

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Liza Sudina 05 October 2015

Yes, it's a miracle, it's amazing! they move of course only by Godly blessing. some people don't beleive that it's easy. just look up to the sky - stones are fleeting!

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What a rhyming touch. Poetic beauty. Perfect

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Manonton Dalan 16 November 2015

stones melting in sky... I think I got it

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Savita Tyagi 12 October 2015

Imagination is liberated here to bring joy from things that do not behave as if confined and controlled by law. I do not know any other way to enjoy this poem but to fly with stones and rivers. Thanks for sharing.n

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Rajnish Manga 06 October 2015

I can vouch for the philosophical undertones from beginning to the end of the poem and love remains a binding force for all human beings. Liked it very much. Thanks, Kumarmani ji.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 October 2015

Stones are melting by love touch, Doves are kissing sky very much. We see flow of love in far clutch, Amazing tale this is true as such. Read the poem several times, Finding the self in all rhymes. Really stones melt by love touch, I agree with you very much. Loved reading and commenting, ................................... ... .10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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