Stranger Poem by Asif Baloch

Stranger

Rating: 5.0


In the mirror as I see
A stranger standing
In front of me
A face once full of
Life and smiles
Turned into broken and
Tormented by lies
Lurking shadows
Blown away smokes
Put off sparks
Lazy strokes
Sullen eyes
Saddened smile
Glaring me
Through painful sight
Asking me
What have I done?
Living in the world
Known as none
Rising every second
Just to fall
On the path of venomous thorns
I was forced to stroll
Was my life is that
What I see
Weeping and crying
For love to be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 23 October 2008

This a great novel theme. Kind of Jekyll and Hyde or seeing at our alter ego.......I felt this poem could have been made more cogent to a definite ending........well done..........10

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Anjali Sinha 22 October 2008

a reflection for all to see +++10 as always anju

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Seema Chowdhury 22 October 2008

rise and fall, the two most important phases of our lives. well composed and well thought.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 October 2008

We 're the stranger in our own mind when all rooms to surpass has been blocked! !

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To lose an old self and find a new self-that's like getting a second chance in life.very insightful.a ten from e for your self-portrayal.

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Naru Kaede 18 November 2008

Wow, it almost same, someone inside us, right? we have the same taste... heheheh, this is the great one! I give you 10+ for this one! Lovely!

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Marria Attar 07 November 2008

wow..great poem.. I like the rhymes..well done

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Evaughn Gray 28 October 2008

aww that's so sad and heart breaking: (but it was beautiful ~Love Hazel G.E

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 27 October 2008

Oh...fantastic. I loved reading this poem. Thanks.

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Shiza Khan 25 October 2008

this one's great... a must read for everyone

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