Stranger Poem by kite remedy

Stranger

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Today I saw a stranger,
whose smile was so familiar.
And I called,
but I didn't seem to hear an answer..

Seemed to be an acquaintance,
so his name what I tried to remember.
And he waited and waited for an utter..

He stayed there in silence,
and our heart beat in resonance,
so close yet so far and far and farther..

Today I saw a stranger,
smiled from inside of a mirror.
And he smiled and smiled,
but I didn't remember..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 27 November 2008

to inseminate of.... Today I saw a stranger, smiled from inside of a mirror. And he smiled and smiled, but I did'nt remember..

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wow love the point in this poem.. great piece Krista

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

Don't talk to stranger..................but please talk when you start to hallucinating.Nice piece Kite.

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Aijaz Asif 28 November 2008

a very nice write indeed, almost like my poem 'Stranger' lol....but this one is quite different...and i liked it, thanks for sharing 10++++ rgds asif

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Subbaraman N V 06 December 2008

A good poem. Let us learn to see i kith and kin in the strangers too!

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Colin Jeffery 30 November 2008

A good poem on many levels.

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Naru Kaede 29 November 2008

Someone that don't realize himself in mirror... It's almost same with my poem 'Someone Inside me', , And i like you're word, you use a simple word that can make me understand, , (because my english it's so bad) hehehe, , Regards, , Naru Kaede

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Joseph Poewhit 28 November 2008

Sometimes people don't know themselves, it's good to know your real self.

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Carol Lovelady 28 November 2008

Beautiful piece. Sometimes we get farther and farther away from the person we used to know(ourselves) We are not sure if we understand the actions, moods, or behavior we exemplify..maybe it can also be related to someone reaching various levels of maturity. Thanks for sharing great job! !

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