Suicide's Not A Way Out! Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury
Suicide's Not A Way Out!
When life seems all hopeless
still don't yah loose all scope of hope
for there's this thing dangling in the air
Reach out for God's sturdy rope.
For how sure can you be that
death will take you to a better fate?
What if you are plunged into a plight much worse
where there's no turning back at any rate!
You too haven't been impeccable and above all blame
that you wish for a perfect rosy life
The excuses for suicide are usually so lame
Better enjoy your share even in strife.
Donot friend, plan to commit this act
just to invoke another's pity and regret
The pity and regret will come and go
besides, it soothes no decomposed
and a large slice of life will go waste.
Why rush for the grave, for greater gloom
Suicide's ain't a way out fellow human friend
Pray a godless way not send you unto this doom
You haven't right to bring any life to its end.
And it's probable that all those years
that you now wish to recklessly discard in dust
have something bright ahead, look for a ray of hope
and extinguish it not if in God you trust!
A really embracing read, I have face moods where I have felt desperate, but not enough to do myself in, a positive ray, of looking forward to life.
Great truths in this poem. Most people who commit suicide perhaps do so in a rage of (temporary) insanity. The values and purposes that one holds may be very important. Excellent poem.
Love this very positive take on life. It not only warns against a destructive trend, but also offers an alternative - God. May it touch and save many lives by helping to steer them in the right direction. A wonderful poem.
That's really well said. I think faith gives you a solid overall view of life. As you say, YOU HAVEN'T RIGHT TO BRING ANY LIFE TO ITS END. There are rich implications in this statement. We were put into this world by a power beyond fathoming, for purposes we do not fully understand, so we cannot set ourselves up as judges over life.
For those committing suicide, Before you jump from way up high, Before you take that final dive, You denude yourself of human pride;
For how sure can you be that death will take you to a better fate? What if you are plunged into a plight much worse where there's no turning back at any rate! keep it up ;)
This poem is a social service on your part, and a very substantial contribution to the society...
great great message and motivation for those who have lost hope wonderful work grea work :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Suicide is for weak people who are not able to face up with the life's problems and things in it's case you wrote this poem in a great and nice way well done.