William Jackson

Rookie (San Antonio, Texas)

Sun And Moon - Poem by William Jackson

Sun and Moon
Wishful lovers
Never touch
Languish in silence
Throughout space & time.

She, a fiery siren,
Shines out light,
Passionate love
Towards the object
Of her affection.

And he, the blue moon,
Desiring her caress
Casts his gaze
Upon her visage.

Yet both must find
Permanent satisfaction
With at best and most
Merely the reflection
Of her incandescence
Off his exquisite face.


Comments about Sun And Moon by William Jackson

  • (11/29/2008 12:55:00 AM)


    your first stanza is great. this is very beautiful. good job.
    *Purkey Girl*
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  • (7/31/2008 11:19:00 AM)


    this is such a beautiful poem.ilike the imegery you have woven in the poem10+
    MAMTA
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  • Brian Dorn (7/16/2007 10:41:00 AM)


    Great write, William... I like the human qualities contained within. Superbly done! !
    Brian
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  • Melvina Germain (7/6/2007 10:05:00 AM)


    This is a poem of true beauty William.--Melvina-- (Report) Reply

  • (7/4/2007 11:32:00 PM)


    wow, this is a lovely poem.
    Great job.
    : ]
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  • Tailor Bell (9/4/2006 4:07:00 PM)


    magnificent assignments and a marvelously beautiful work...it moves like the heavenly bodies move gracefully and continuously. excellent work. -Tailor (Report) Reply

  • (8/6/2006 1:13:00 AM)


    Wow...This is kind of eery...in fact kind of spooky...lovely poem
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • (4/19/2006 10:18:00 PM)


    Lovely William, truly a love story

    Patricia
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  • (4/14/2006 7:47:00 PM)


    flawless and quite lovely (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2006 3:51:00 AM)


    William...I understand of every word....these words touch my soul. Thank you~! (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2006 9:43:00 AM)


    I like that the moon is the male and the sun the female. And the reflected light in the last stanza - shivery! (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2006 10:01:00 PM)


    The blue
    side of the moon,
    lone midnight reflections
    searching for the warm cresent of
    your smile.....

    Lovely, however sad...thanks, William.
    Sandra
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  • (4/8/2006 6:31:00 PM)


    Fantastic William! These lovers do they quarrel like us? Who knows......?
    we don't hear their disputes.
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  • (4/8/2006 5:44:00 PM)


    Wow! what powerful emotion in this, you have the poets gift of holding the readers eye as well as there heart in safe hands,10 from me, Love Duncan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 23, 2008


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