Surprises Poem by Bharati Nayak

Surprises

Rating: 3.7


Surprises surprise us
They seem to come from nowhere
They lie hidden in some corner
Come all of a sudden
To catch us unawares
They give us
so many moments
of pleasure
Speaking the words of love and
springing from
a true heart

A surprise
took me over
Suddenly welled up
my tears
They flowed without check
When in the voice of my love
They said
I am here, I am here

It surprised me
When it came
stealthily from behind
Putting hands on my eyes
Asked
Tell me who am I, who am I?

Oh surprises surprise me
When they come in different colors
And merge into one
And become indistinguishable
From each other.

Thursday, July 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: surprise,wonder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 04 July 2015

Sometimes surprises come to us to excite us, to shock us to horror, to move us into tears or to make us jump with joy! ! Whatever it be, a surprise is always a surprise and can produce in us a flurry of emotions! Great theme and great write Bharati!

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2015

Thank you so much.It is wonderful to read your comments.

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Sekharan Pookkat 02 July 2015

We enjoy surprises if it is a long cherished one When it came stealthily from behind Putting hands on my eyes, asked tell me who am I, who am I? beautiful penning

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Bharati Nayak 02 July 2015

For all the valuable opinions I am so thankful.

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Jaishree Nair 02 July 2015

A unique theme that took me by surprise .Enjoyed the flow. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2018

Surprises surprise us They seem to come from nowhere They lie hidden in some corner Come all of a sudden To catch us unawares They give us so many moments of pleasure Speaking the words of love and springing from a true heart.....so touching and impressive with true vision. Beautiful poem.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 September 2017

Merge into one! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Manonton Dalan 15 January 2016

soar-prize that could be... makes us happy or sad.

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Denis Mair 11 September 2015

Thanks for guiding my imagination to picture many-colored surprises coming together- no longer intermittent- to become a state of constant wonder.

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Bharati Nayak 24 July 2015

Life is really full of surprises. It surprises me how this humble poem can touch the hearts of great poets

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