Surrounded By Fakeness Poem by Alexie Whitman

Surrounded By Fakeness

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You laughed and stayed with me
You always made me feel carefree
You told me exactly what I wanted to hear
You made me believe you will take my care
When my life became depressed and a huge mess
I couldn't handle anything and was about to collapse
I came running to you for advice
But you considered it my weak point and pressed it thrice
The real situation exposed you
You had buttered me until I could trust you
And now that you had backstabbed me
I couldn't believe myself for what I had seen
I was just a candy wrapper which had to be thrown away
Even though I had cared for you like a slave
You had loved me until you had completely used me
Losing you was a very hard nut to crack
Even though you always hated me behind my back
You stuck to me through my brightest times
And disappeared during the darkest hours
Was there any difference between you and my shadow?
I cut off my relation with you
And you started talking about me
But I didn't care about it anymore
To be in my life either be real or be gone
I just regret the time I wasted on you
Though my goodness did forgive you
But I was totally done
With each and every fake person
With due time I started to see the light
Soon I realized it was the end of the dark times!

Saturday, November 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fake love,regret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2020

Such a nice poem, Alexie. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Yiyan Han 14 November 2020

Lies hurt and love blind - they usually go hand in hand unfortunately - so that's what the life's experience for. Good write.

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