Sweet Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Sweet

Rating: 5.0


Oh, what sweet music, this earth
does make. When the winds blow, and
the trees gently shake. The rivers
that grumble and rumble, so loud,
then low. Even the ice, mournfully
breaking. The sound of the snow,
when we walk the path, were making.
The rain that patters out it's beat.
The little birdie who tweets. Please,
treasure our earth, it really is, so
sweet.

Thursday, December 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,heart,music,nature,treasure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2018

It is really a mavelous poem on nature and earth having haunting and impressive expression. Sweet music of earth, rumbling and grumbling sound of rivers, pattering of rain and gently shaking of tres are much enjoyable. Beautifully penned and amazingly shared.10

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Rebecca Navarre 09 December 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For your beautifully kind and thoughtful reply! .. Your poetry streams with ever such beauty and light, that brings readers such inspiration and delight! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2018

Hi Becca, Lovely, endearing poem. Nature is so benevolent to us. It makes our lives so happy and enjoyable, with the nectar of Rains, lovely plants, trees, flowers, fruit, fragrances, sweetness...what not... How do we thank Him for all these gifts 🎁..... wonderful poem, Becca.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 December 2018

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For your very beautiful and kind reply! .. Your poetry holds ever such depth and beauty, in each page that unfolds! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 December 2018

Rebecca, such a magnificent poem.....

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Rebecca Navarre 07 December 2018

Thank you! .. Bernard, For your beautifully kind comment! .. Your poetry holds a deep beauty within, that to readers hearts echo's and sings! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessing! ..

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