Sweet Surrender Poem by Aqua Flower

Sweet Surrender

Rating: 5.0


Do you remember
that sweet surrender?
when my petals opened
and you fixed what was broken.
do you remember
the rainbows in the sky
my thirst for you
your liquid that never ran dry?
Do you remember the passion in our kiss
and the feelings of complete bliss?
do you remember the sweet surrender
between the lion and the tigress?

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sweet Surrender
Sunday, August 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love,passion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The story of the Lion and the Tigress
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 19 August 2018

Great romantic poem! 10!

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Aqua Flower 19 August 2018

Thank you for visiting this poem my favorite topic is the line in The Tigress many of my poems have that theme.

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Lovely lines loaded with love and rich in romance. Eloquently expressed my friend!

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Rebecca Navarre 20 August 2018

Beautifully sewn! .. With a beautifully romantic heart shown! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Definite 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Crayon Poet 19 August 2018

Direct and amazing; it seems likely the fellow fondly remembers every moment of the encounter.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2018

Do you remember the passion in our kiss and the feelings of complete bliss? do you remember the sweet surrender between the lion and the tigress? ..........romantic expression. A beautiful poem on love and longing nicely executed with the love of lion and tigress. Thanks.10

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Rini Shibu 19 August 2018

Very romantic and hot poem

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Aqua Flower 19 August 2018

Coming from a poetess who writes romantic poetry that is a compliment! Thank you so much.

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