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*** Take Me With You ***

Rating: 4.2

Dusk chasing the lazy dawn
Sounds of angry skies deafening
Lightning, like a giant snapshot
Blinding your eyes to madness
Rains fiercely flooding the downhill pond
The slippery path ruining
Mind halts desires getting bold
Vision cuffs to the onus

I saw you standing near to Heaven pane

Gazing at sizzling droplets
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Ayesha Sartawi 30 November 2008

ANOTHER GOOD ONE SULAIMAN FULL OF PASSION AND IMAGINATION.. GOOD LUCK

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Colin Jeffery 30 November 2008

The Muse at its best

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Austin Womer 29 November 2008

beautiful imaginitive poem loved it! 5 stars

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Imogen Brand 29 November 2008

I can feel you passion in this poem. The imagery is rolling of your tongue into your work. well done it is really hard to do that is writing

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Monlano Kim 28 November 2008

Wow! Very descriptive...I love the way you express ur desires.

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Exasperation 22 December 2019

Life is just not Fair...just square

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Alex Tedeschi 18 December 2008

Wow! Really good =) I like it.

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Naidz Ladia 09 December 2008

this is really nice...i love this poem...I REALLY LIKE THIS..

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Eunice Ogunleye 03 December 2008

'Is there any other love in you? Betrayal is the word for sinner Remember my promises? I will hang my neck to your flawless hair Decapitating my head for your moo Enhancing your voices to purer Disjointing my legs for I couldn’t run less Making us the most corrupted pair' This part really caught my attention. I loved every bit of the poem I'd rather be gone than live life without love.

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Egi David Perdana 30 November 2008

you are no 1 sensei I not doubt! ! ! !

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