Take this rose
And dance with it between yr teeth
Take this rose
And never tell me that you love me
However, you must go
As this solitary rose means nothing
But yr departure
And I curse it's loveliness
While my tears burn it until
The phoenix rises
Take this rose
And give it to another
While my tears burn it until The phoenix rises....poignantly expressed. Scintillating poetic expression. A wonderful poem....full marks.
An honest portrait of hurt feelings, the pain is felt behind every word. I can relate with this 100 %.
Gorgeous write accompanied with great imagery. A fascinating poem. Fantastic! 5 Stars full
A deeply poignant and moving poem. Powerful lines that strike one's heart. The images enhanced the beauty of this write. To my Poem List.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great imagery and fantastic poem. Loved it.5****