M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 165,800 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Tanka - 1 - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

She is beautiful
till the time she keeps smiling
when she opens her mouth
volcano erupts from eyes
and the beauty gets destroyed.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love

Form: Tanka

Comments about Tanka - 1 by M. Asim Nehal

  • (5/28/2016 6:22:00 AM)

    Ha ha ha..Nice humour. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/2/2016 9:23:00 AM)

    One of the best Tanka I have read so far...Hats Off Asimji. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 5:05:00 PM)

    A perfect Tanka, Mohammed. Descriptive and emotive opening with a twist at the end. A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/28/2016 8:40:00 AM)

    Hilarious......just loved it.....thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/28/2016 8:30:00 AM)

    hahahahaha so don't you dare mess up with her: D

    10 plusssssss for voicing the truth.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2016

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