Tanka 9 - Waving In Rhythm Comments

Ever so very very beautifully painted! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

Magnificent! .. Ever such beauty and mesmerizing thoughts to hold endlessly through out time! ..

A beautiful depiction of the wonders of leaves. Liked the analogy put in the poem.. A well crafted Tanka, Dr. Geeta.

Nice try Geeta, ...BUT.....I believe you mean 'waving', not 'waiving': 'waive /wāv/ verb gerund or present participle: waiving refrain from insisting on or using (a right or claim) . 'he will waive all rights to the money' '

And Thanx

Love this Tanka Geeta Bravo Please read my recent poems and comment! ! ! ! !

This is beautifully written.... thanks for sharing....