Tanka 9 - Waving In Rhythm Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

Tanka 9 - Waving In Rhythm

Rating: 5.0

leaves like dance gestures

charmingly green in colour,

Waving in rhythm,

fascinatingly designed,

timeless, meaningful mudras!

Sunday, November 17, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: colour,dance,green,leaves,meaningful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 November 2024

Love this Tanka Geeta Bravo Please read my recent poems and comment! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 19 November 2024

This is beautifully written.... thanks for sharing....

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Rebecca Navarre 13 December 2024

Ever so very very beautifully painted! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 December 2024

Magnificent! .. Ever such beauty and mesmerizing thoughts to hold endlessly through out time! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2024

A beautiful depiction of the wonders of leaves. Liked the analogy put in the poem.. A well crafted Tanka, Dr. Geeta.

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2024

Nice try Geeta, ...BUT.....I believe you mean 'waving', not 'waiving': 'waive /wāv/ verb gerund or present participle: waiving refrain from insisting on or using (a right or claim) . 'he will waive all rights to the money' '

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 November 2024

And Thanx

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