Tanka - Dragonfly Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Dragonfly

Rating: 5.0


two trees meet as one
two dragonflies dart past them
through an empty branch
over water and oars drip
as they transcended darkness

Saturday, May 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 28 May 2016

Story of past, reminiscence for today...vivid image there

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T Rajan Evol 26 July 2020

Symbolic in this poem is outstanding

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2016

Awesome Tanka...10+++

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M Asim Nehal 26 December 2018

Thank u Darren..

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2016

Praising the ways of nature! Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2016

A wonderfully written piece. I thoroughly enjoyed

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Amazing Tanka, a story in it, a life lived and cherished.

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