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Tanka (From A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka) 1

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a person
with whom I'm not familiar
has called me 'brother';
others, whom I greatly helped,
betrayed me — the human soul!


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Tanka (From A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka)  1
Friday, October 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,human being,souls
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this tanka is in my compilation: 'A Season for Everyone - Haiku & Tanka Poetry'.
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 November 2017

as a doc have no attachment your are an outstanding poet...and a doc I am a standing out poet and also as a doc at a dock read my Moms Smiles o doc yu may also rock

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 September 2020

sometimes the strangers come as helper suddenly where known are doubtful loyalty of dog stronger where human avoids savior

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Unwritten Soul 18 February 2018

It takes beautiful soul to appreciate another soul as real companion, but in abundance of soul, many of us take less appreciation for the soul just a name and a creation, and ignore its essence

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 February 2018

the mistery of ''Soul'' is the mistery of ''Universe'', as parts of the same 'entity'

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Minnie Froh 11 January 2018

how many times this happens! great poem.

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Fabrizio Frosini 13 January 2018

thank you, Minnie

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Mj Lemon 26 December 2017

The kindness of strangers....you capture in a profound way what is so familiar to so many. A magnificent tanka, Fabrizio.

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Fabrizio Frosini 29 December 2017

thank you so much! HAPPY NEW YEAR!

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Artep Ofpoetry 09 November 2017

yes really.and this happens so often ((

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 November 2017

Artep, thanks for visiting and commenting

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