Tanka - Love Or Lust Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Love Or Lust

Rating: 5.0


when you gaze at me
while I pluck these rose flowers -
the thorns pierce my heart
my body shimmers with shame
the lust takes over the love

Tuesday, August 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

'Lust takes over the love'! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Elena Sandu 24 August 2016

Awesome penning, love how we can learn of a life time in only a few short lines.

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Kelly Kurt 23 August 2016

An honest depiction of the reality of what most think is pure love

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Abduhoo Salamath 23 August 2016

excellent....nice and good thinking.....

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Savita Tyagi 23 August 2016

Great Tanka. Our own reaction recognizes the difference between the two.

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