Shihabudheen K J

Rookie - 397 Points (13/1/1990 / Edapal)

Tears - Poem by Shihabudheen K J

Open your window,
you can see my childhood
waving naughty hands at you.

Open your palm,
you can see your highschool bangles
stained with my teenage blood.

open your book,
you will see eternal rose petals that
cried between our first kiss.

Open your room,
you will find valentine days
on all days of calendar.

Open your pain, you will know;
healing is not medicine but me.

Open your heart,
you will still feel the rhythm of my veins.

Open your eyes,
you will now realise the tears;
falling down your cheek are not yours,
but mine.

I beg you,
invite all but not me to your wedding.
Upon the mountain mist,
i will be praying for your wellbeing.

Comments about Tears by Shihabudheen K J

  • Scarlett Outlaw (12/3/2012 8:19:00 AM)

    this is really, really, good! ! ! congratualtions... (Report) Reply

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  • Smriti Sharma (12/2/2012 10:54:00 AM)

    very touching poem..really..
    Good job Shihabudheen..keep it up
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  • Heather Wilkins (10/31/2012 4:33:00 PM)

    open your eyes you will now realize the tears falling down your cheek are not yours, but mine. sad and touching verse. (Report) Reply

  • Dr Sruthi Varma (9/18/2012 12:22:00 AM)

    Awesomeee....heart touching too.... (Report) Reply

  • Udaya R. Tennakoon (9/1/2012 8:08:00 AM)

    very touching theme. most of us have this experience. thank you Shihabudheen (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (7/6/2012 3:44:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! ! ! Wonderful write Shihabudheen! More please.. :) (Report) Reply

  • (7/4/2012 2:38:00 PM)

    WOW! ! fantastic poem yaar, what a beautiful way of expression awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (6/24/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    Who broke ur heart my boy? ? ? beautiful poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/10/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    I beg you,
    invite all but not me to your wedding.
    Upon the mountain mist,
    i will be praying for your wellbeing....

    really touching....words scented with lost love....
    (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (6/10/2012 7:52:00 AM)

    very touching poem, i love it... (Report) Reply

  • Tiana Webb (6/5/2012 12:28:00 AM)

    Wow, such a touching poem. I can feel your emotions as though they are my own.
    Tiana xx
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  • Mukta Sawant (6/1/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    You have described each stage of life very nicely. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (5/30/2012 12:10:00 AM)

    sometimes tools of poetic trade offer no service after reading an innocent feeling expressed so beautifully....! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (5/29/2012 10:35:00 PM)

    A sense of loss, the pang of separation above all the cloud of sadness are dominating this poem.Touched me much! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 31, 2012

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