Tears And Ashes Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Tears And Ashes

Rating: 5.0


If my tears should drop onto yr ashes
Perhaps, you would come alive
As yr spirit rises from the urn
To make love to me once more
We will live together for all eternity
And no one could say that I didn't love you
As infinity falls into the dust
We become the earth
And grow back for whar we were
If my tears should plunder into yr ashes
Cover me in its mud

Sunday, April 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: death of a friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

This poem impresses me, aptly worded and very logical. Bravo LeeAnn! I have enjoyed very much your sparkling poem!

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Dilly Swain 19 April 2021

Quite a brilliant piece.

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Kostas Lagos 19 April 2021

Wow! This poem is truly impressive

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M Asim Nehal 19 April 2021

If my tears should plunder into yr ashes Cover me in its mud............Excellent one.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 May 2021

I have come to observe Nature's progress again, your words still impresses me, LeeAnn. This fantastic poem deserves a full 5 Stars.

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Jayne Louise Davies 24 July 2023

Wonderful poem LeeAnn x Thanks for sharing : )

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Anjandev Roy 24 July 2023

This is an amazing work.....love to read it time and again....

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Anjandev Roy 30 June 2023

........live together for all eternity....... brilliant work......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 September 2021

To make love to me once more We will live together for all eternity And no one could say that I didn't love you....endearing....A sweet poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2021

A brilliant poem... thoroughly poetic..liked it

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