Tears In My Heart Poem by Fubara Benstowe
Tears In My Heart
You made me believe it was okay.
You made me feel accepted.
As my ego slide down through my feet
To say i am sorry
And tears in my heart
flows so slow and calm
As the extent of my fury
Clicks a refined relief,
but a trace is left like scars
That Reminds of a day
in a white blue screen
A day i wish to forget
And finally forgive my self
So sad i prepare my tears
So sad i dwell in them
Even when i thought i was strong
To never let a drop
Hardly did i know
My heart was bleeding tears.
On knowing that
i am no longer in your list
It makes my heart cry
It Makes my blood boil
It makes my world to shrink.
My heart is hungry
Hungry for your forgiveness,
So that tears in my heart will seize
Seize to bleed again.
O! tears in my heart
Creatively written and enjoyable to read. Love; D
painful....i can feel it.....so i guess that means you did your job, you poet you
My heart is hungry / Hungry for your forgiveness, So that tears in my heart will seize Seize to bleed again. / O! tears in my heart Strong...very strong the poetic personality you bear. Beautiful writing touches my own cry also. Keep your standard high to this height. Never I'll forget..MY HEART IS HUNGRY / HUNGRY FOR YOUR FORGIVENESS.....no escape I found here, but love is so loud....fantastic expression. Thank you.........more you write.......10++ Regards, pranab
Really fantastic. Vivid imagery and emotinal style. Nice write.
sincerly honest, beautifully evocative, uniquely outstanding..words are trite to describe the poem's beauty..., great POETS are born not made, hold fervently to your poetic aspirations. the concept of life is all about poetry..., write more to tell the world of the AFRICANS' inert 'poetic dreams'...that burns like the red ember in the kitchen...
A strong and evocative write. Quite similar to my own poem 'My Heart is Bruised Black and Blue' actually, keep following and writing from your heart. -Leslie
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12/5/2024 3:21:50 AM # 1.0.0
awwwww.. this is very deep i can find so many words to tell you how beautiful this poem is. even the name gives it away. keep up the awesum poetry my friend :)