Elena Sandu


Tears Of Love - Poem by Elena Sandu

Would you quit
rubbing love
to your heart?
Better
rub onion
to the eyes!
It has the same effect
of giving cries
Only, for shorter
period of times.


Comments about Tears Of Love by Elena Sandu

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (10/5/2012 3:50:00 PM)


    heart burns brilliant being inflamed by love
    yet eyes looks red by tears losing love, .............................interesting write 10++.thanks for sharing
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  • Poetheart Morgan (9/23/2012 10:24:00 PM)


    yes, must deserves it! ! ! ! Onion? ? ? ? Great like always! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (9/21/2012 1:22:00 AM)


    I enjoy this cutie poem especially the word... rub onion...so great! ! (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (9/14/2012 10:26:00 AM)


    wonderful
    it reminds me one of Ozzy Osbourne's song named No More Tears.
    Mucho gracias meansm
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  • Valerie Dohren (9/5/2012 3:38:00 PM)


    Agree with you here Elena, the one thing which shouldn't make you cry always does - good one. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/22/2012 3:28:00 AM)


    Ah i love this Elena, so profound and it's fit the meaning very well..great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (8/21/2012 3:17:00 AM)


    Precise and effective (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (8/8/2012 5:38:00 PM)


    Ah you almost thumb your nose at the cupids bow...
    catch me if you can

    self sustaining and confident lines
    cheers
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  • Kelly Seale (8/8/2012 5:24:00 PM)


    Elena, I love your analogy! Your words flow so easy, yet stick to my lips like honey. Great write!
    -Kelly.
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  • Hamid Negah (8/8/2012 12:49:00 PM)


    excellent, short poem more interesting, i loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Wabi Sabi (8/8/2012 8:32:00 AM)


    quite interesting! don't wake sleeping babies by rubbing either. I just got one too. I enjoyed! thanks a lot! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 8, 2012


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