Memory Of Love Making Poem by Elena Sandu

Memory Of Love Making

Rating: 5.0

My back hurts,
I try to work in my knees
But those hurts too.

My shoulder stings
With each move
To work well what shall I fix?

My body, dear friend!
If let my heart to love you
My mind, could give you any strenght?

Over the ocean
And the seven seas
My soul I let to fly away

From up I watch and listen to myself:
-Love you so much my dear Earth,
Sweet strawberries:

Next year please
Do bring joy to many children
Bond them with nature's loving memory.

..Working on the fields of strawberries, I had a beautiful experience, realized how wonderful for soul is to be directly in touch with grains of earth.. Forgot about all of my pain and done my part quite well...also felt it was great to be able to help my friend.
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 28 September 2016

Picking SBs in the field is not a simple act of plucking. When you are at it, you see them, touch them and feel them, smell them, taste them and you visualize too. On the ground your soul devours a world. After all, it is nature, you are engulfed in. Wonderful write. Congrats for being The PoD. X

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Thank you so much dear Jayatissa, wonderful mindfulness isn't it? On the ground your soul devours a world, wow, you put volumes of life in 7 words, amazing pen you shared here, I am so grateful!

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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2016

This is very crafty poem and Congrats for POTD honours.10++

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Elena Sandu 28 September 2016

Awesome you are, dear Mohammed, thank you!

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Rajnish Manga 28 September 2016

What a wonderful poem! It is indeed a celebration of all lovely things including sweet and delicious fruits that the earth provides to us every now and then. Yes, the man has to perspire to get it. Thanks for sharing the poem, Elena. And Congrats for being the poet of the day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2020

Knee woks giving you support. You still do not feel tired and work hard and write beautiful poems. Over the seven oceans your soul flies wonderfully and perceives the light of joy and dignity. In Earth you find sweet strawberry. This poem is an outstanding poem and I put my historic 39999th comment on this nice work. Thank you very much for penning this poem....10 (My thirty-nine thousand nine hundred ninety ninth comment)

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C F 13 July 2019

Well crafted poem and innovative.... you write really very well.10+

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Robert Murray Smith 17 June 2018

When working with the fruits of nature we are stained by juice. A wonderful poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 February 2018

Over the ocean And the seven seas My soul I let to fly away.......oh what a fine poetic expression dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in appreciation of nature and good friendship. Thanks for sharing Elena.

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