I breathe my love for you
Because of you
My heart illuminates
In blue bright color shades
Because of you
I feel I've reached my fate..
Because of you
I'm blessed
With more then nothing:
Pain Sweet Pain..
One is ready to undergo pain for the sake of sweet love. It is a greater human value ever existing in the society. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful theme.
Strong poem. I find the idea of a 'sweet pain' a touch unsettling though. Not the pain itself, but the gain by it that is sweet, as Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon said in more concise words. Chance set me to this poem after you commented on my poem 'gentle stream' - by coincidence both poems are very similar.
How can pain ever be sweet except that gain usually comes after pain. I thank the pain because it brought me much gain. Well done my friend.
'Even pain that is a God to the senses'. Poet Marwin once written this line. And you the fulfilled lover think yourself blessed with pain, so you are also great. Well written love. Your beloved live long with you.....long to its extreme. Thank you for sharing such a poem.....10 Regards, pranab
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
short but very strong poem. I can feel d theme of love, trust faith. even tho we humans can cause pain smtimes, love stil covers all our weaknesses.