Teenage Love Story Poem by Hira Akhtar
Teenage Love Story
A young handsome boy, his youth in full bloom
saw a pretty young girl, a fine dream, came true
The day was so long while he toiled and dreamed
losing in her beauty, such a fantasy to live
But each day she passed by she was cloaked by a veil
an adorable princess, a sweet fairy tale
Into her soft eyes he longed just to stare
with a lust for untying her long, silken hair
One night finding her image in moon
decided to tell his fervency, to her, soon
Then he went to the land of dreams
there on all sides, flow the fascinating love streams
He awaited for her, the next day long
and the tree flagged where his hopes swung
Years passed, she not ever came
but left, in his heart, an everlasting flame
give your remarks please
regards
hira
Once again... a new beautiful poem...yeh u are right about teenage love..... Want more fresh poems from you..
such dreams happen very often when the lovers desires are out in the open her face veiled the moon or not nor the sun could unveil dreams came to go away when i had a similar dream she showed her face i was dumbfounded such a beauty the moon fell shy and hid behind a cloud the gal also vanished in the crowd hit my guts so very loud I felt ashamed and feel till today was i for that moment insensibily lame the DREAM NEVER CAME AGAIN..All such imagery is alas in vain
A nice write. Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me.. Naila
losing in her beauty, such a fantasy to live.............i'm not sure of the use of losing here. i would understand lost in her beauty. Years passed, she not ever came ......................, and she never came ..........this sounds better to me. :) i like the poem a lot and the Poet's Notes is a nice addition to the poem. to MyPoemList. and i'll use in my/our June 2017 showcase for PH poets. i'll let you know when poems are ready to be viewed. Thanks. favorite lines: Into her soft eyes he longed just to stare with a lust for untying her long, silken hair and Then he went to the land of dreams there on all sides, flow the fascinating love streams bri :) i will not change the poem unless you say it is ok with you to make my suggested changes. your name, of course, will be in the showcase with the poem.
I appreciate the Poet's Notes. Well thought out. Love- physical, mental and spiritual along with respect for the spouse constitute a successful marriage. Intellectual compatibility is also a requisite.
A pure poetic thought. You may like to read my poem (Love and Lust) . Thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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hahaha! No never 😂 @Sam Sam
Ahan!
Well the lines were so deep! I definitely fell for it...You are an adorable writer but it seems you have not written for a long time....I would love to look forward if you are interesting any more in this writing stuff :)