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Thank God! !

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Thank God! !
As you are back
From the tunnel of death,
trapped inside the murky depths
for nine days;
When a part of the tunnel caved in
And the fate of you two was sealed
In uncertainty for such a long duration.
Oxygen, food and communication restored
We can understand your emotions

When you tearfully asked the officers outside
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Tuesday, September 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,life and death,spirit
Recently, a disaster struck in the Indian state of Himachal Pradesh when a part of the incomplete tunnel, caved in. About 90 labourers managed to come out but two workers were trapped inside. Rescue work continued for nine days and they both were rescued safely.
Shimizu Mizuhala 25 May 2017

Thank God! ! Is this your personal experience?

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Rajnish Manga 25 May 2017

Thanks for your visit and for reading the poem (Thank God! !) . No, not my personal experience. We were following it through Newspaper and TV reports.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 November 2020

Wow a noble compassionate poem feeling grateful to God for fellow humans rescued after many days, . Kudos for a great poem.

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Nice thanking the rescue team.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2018

The disaster struck in the Indian state of Himachal Pradesh has been so touchingly inscribed. By the grace of God ninety labourers were managed to come out expect two who were trapped inside. It was happy that finally the two workers were rescued for the nine days continious work of the rescue team. Thank to God and thank to you for sharing this incedental poem.

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Rajnish Manga 09 December 2018

Of course, it was a difficult operation but the courage of the persons trapped inside the tunnel and those of the rescue team is commendable which made this miracle happen. Thanks, Kumarmani ji.

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Michael Walker 23 May 2018

Such a miracle that all the workers were rescued. To survive for nine days in such claustrophobia shows in itself how tough-minded the men were.

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Rajnish Manga 24 May 2018

Of course, it was the spirit of survivors as well as the faith of the rescue team which paved the way for this operation to be successful.

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The interlacement and flourishing of rescue team are quite commendable indeed so is your craftsmanship and vivid narration of the event........Rajnishji........thanks for sharing......10

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Rajnish Manga 23 March 2018

So pleased to have your kind words of appreciation. Thanks a lot, Deepak ji.

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