Thanks For Stabbing My Back, At Least My Heart Wasn'T Hurt! Poem by Abhishek Tiwari

Thanks For Stabbing My Back, At Least My Heart Wasn'T Hurt!

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Thanks for telling me, you are not what you are..! ! And thanks for not telling, that,
you have got two faces...! !
Now, please do tell me one thing,
which was the face that I loved,
and which one I talked with...? ?
Because, unfortunately I havent seen you...! !
Thanks for stabbing me on my back when I hugged you...! !
At least my heart wasn't hurt...! !
and now do me one more favour...
please let me know,
which was the face I loved and which one I talked with,
because,
perhaps fortunately,
till now, I havent seen you..! !
And all I want is to see you before I take my last breath..! !
Before that, thank you for every dropp of tears
my eyes carry and every dropp of blood that trickles down my back.. thank you for everything! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ijlal Haider 13 November 2011

betrayed feeling from deep core of heart........ very nice.... i simply loved the line ' thanks for stabbing my back, at least my heart wasn't hurt ' i started it recently.... visit www. pibi2.blogspot.com......your comments means alot....

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Aya Kishiko 14 November 2011

Don't get sad because it's over already but smile and be happy because it happened. ^_^.pfufuf.smile!

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Cosmic Dreamer 15 November 2011

So sad... Misplaced love is merely a shadow in the light of true love...

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Neetha Sasidharan 20 November 2011

wow! u hv successfully put those feelings in2 words...

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isabella Francis 30 November 2011

Just awesome.. I simply love it..

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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

Now, please do tell me one thing, which was the face that I loved, and which one I talked with...? ?

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Susan Williams 04 September 2020

Thanks for stabbing me on my back when I hugged you...! ! At least my heart wasn't hurt...! ! - - - - - - - - - - > a title that made me chuckle but it also let's the reader know there is awful pain under those words....10

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Exuberant write though the tale is woeful. Please translate a few of your Hindi poems into English for our sake..

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Leena Sharma 23 August 2012

You are so very spontaneous in your feelings....nice play of words!

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Zoya Khalid 27 April 2012

Thanx for this beautiful poem.

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