Thanks for telling me, you are not what you are..! ! And thanks for not telling, that,
you have got two faces...! !
Now, please do tell me one thing,
which was the face that I loved,
and which one I talked with...? ?
Because, unfortunately I havent seen you...! !
Thanks for stabbing me on my back when I hugged you...! !
At least my heart wasn't hurt...! !
and now do me one more favour...
please let me know,
which was the face I loved and which one I talked with,
because,
perhaps fortunately,
till now, I havent seen you..! !
And all I want is to see you before I take my last breath..! !
Before that, thank you for every dropp of tears
my eyes carry and every dropp of blood that trickles down my back.. thank you for everything! !
Don't get sad because it's over already but smile and be happy because it happened. ^_^.pfufuf.smile!
So sad... Misplaced love is merely a shadow in the light of true love...
Now, please do tell me one thing, which was the face that I loved, and which one I talked with...? ?
Thanks for stabbing me on my back when I hugged you...! ! At least my heart wasn't hurt...! ! - - - - - - - - - - > a title that made me chuckle but it also let's the reader know there is awful pain under those words....10
Exuberant write though the tale is woeful. Please translate a few of your Hindi poems into English for our sake..
You are so very spontaneous in your feelings....nice play of words!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
betrayed feeling from deep core of heart........ very nice.... i simply loved the line ' thanks for stabbing my back, at least my heart wasn't hurt ' i started it recently.... visit www. pibi2.blogspot.com......your comments means alot....