All Is Yours! ! Poem by Abhishek Tiwari

All Is Yours! !

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You can hit me,
kill me, or,
destroy me,
but I can do just nothing,
because
I love you

You can take me to the zenith,
and dropp me from there,
and smile at my tears,
but I can do just nothing,
because
I love you

You can take away my heart,
my soul,
my breath
I can only smile at all this,
because I love you

People say,
'Why are you crying? '
even when I laugh
I can tell them nothing
because I love you
Just because I love you..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 02 September 2012

lovely poem defining true love

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Varna Soyokaze 03 September 2012

Small lines convey long words.................

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Eindaray Kyaw 03 September 2012

I can see you love yours very much! ! Great job! !

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Indranil Bhaduri 04 October 2012

Heartfelt expressions of love.. Thank you for sharing

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Sneha Jawaharya 02 November 2012

good enough to impress.

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Susan Williams 04 September 2020

You can hit me, kill me, or, destroy me, but I can do just nothing, because I love you- - - - - - - -> young new love feels this way but it is dangerous to live love that way!

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Babatunde Aremu 04 August 2014

This is God's kind of love. Good spirit. I like that

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Roseann Shawiak 16 March 2014

Being hurt over and over again, yet still loving. Great poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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V P Mahur 26 February 2014

to Much in a few words. sweet read. Plz come and read my poems yuor suggestions will be great for me

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Heather Wilkins 01 November 2013

Nice and lovely poem. Your love runs very deep. enjoyed

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