M. Asim Nehal

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Thanks To All........... - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Hurt made me grow,
Failure helped me to know,
Losses taught me how to make gains,
Some lessons I learned from pains.

No way, can we change our past,
The only thing we can do is to learn very fast
Present demands more duty
Future holds all the beauty.

I have learned to smile all the way,
Take the things into stride as they pave,
Life is all about how you take,
It is up to us to make or break.

Tides taught me to humble down,
Dust reminded me to settle down,
Today I cherish those lessons
Which allowed me to do “Thumbs up”

Topic(s) of this poem: life, motivation

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Thanks To All........... by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (11/23/2016 1:24:00 PM)

    Strife
    A clean mind, cleare thought and cogent expression. (Report) Reply

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  • Sonali Ganguly (4/4/2016 12:35:00 AM)


    all the lines are really very beautiful. loved the poem. thankx for sharing sir (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2015 12:42:00 PM)


    Thanks from our side as well. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (11/6/2015 5:53:00 AM)


    Tides taught me to humble down...dust taught me to settle down. Great expression. Swept me off my feet (Report) Reply

  • (11/4/2015 9:09:00 PM)


    An engagging and a thought provoking write (Report) Reply

  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/23/2015 2:41:00 PM)


    Ah! An old saying from my mother, Things that hurt, instruct... yours is a fine verse!
    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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  • Dhiren Doley (9/29/2015 8:19:00 AM)


    Yes, a beguiled heart is the most creative. When you get it bores but when you lose you miss. that is the beginning of all creation. (Report) Reply

  • Sara Militello (9/28/2015 11:55:00 PM)


    For one so young, you understand a lot Asim Nehal. I especially liked this poem for its subject matter and how well you put it together with the last word in sentences rhyming.....without losing the meaning of the message. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/29/2015 3:00:00 AM)

    Thank u so much.........

  • (9/17/2015 7:49:00 PM)


    I have learnt to smile....... Very Inspiring (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2015 10:31:00 AM)


    Inspiring and motivational poem. Stay blessed and keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (9/12/2015 5:53:00 AM)


    Positive thoughts to help us journey through life happily. Nice word flow. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/6/2015 11:34:00 PM)


    Life is all about how you take,
    It is up to us to make or break.
    ...so true. it depends on us, how we'll treat life. an amazing poem and each line is precious. thank you...10
    (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/6/2015 1:41:00 PM)


    Present demands more duty,
    Future holds all the beauty
    Loved reading the poem
    Added to my poem list
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 6, 2015



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