louis rams

Gold Star - 11,691 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

The Angels Came Calling - Poem by louis rams

the angels came calling on this
beautiful and glorious day.
as i turned my face to look the other way.
to see the reflections of my life gone by.

i saw every second of every minute of every day
all the words i had spoken
and things i had to say.

(this was the moment of truth and consequence)

the angels came calling
to show me what my life had been.
how i broke so many rules
and harbored so many sins.

i tried to convince myself
that my life was very good.
but! i stand by myself
as most sinners should.

i closed off my heart to all
the voices that surrounded me.
telling me of their aches and pains.
now i sit here crying
holding my head in shame

the angels are here to show me
that' i still have a chance you see'
to turn my life around
and follow the word of GOD.
he is willing to help me
and get a brand new start.

the angels are the lords messengers
and they carry his word to us
so if you want to survive
in HIM you put your trust.


Comments about The Angels Came Calling by louis rams

  • Linda Winchell (3/14/2009 10:59:00 AM)

    Now Sir Louis this is one of just another Mastered penned pieces! WOW! Placed me in your shoes as I read along. Sins we try to keep hidden, yet not. Angles will come to greet us when it is our time to leave earth, journey over, and a new life in Christ Jesus to begin! God Be With You! Ten, Ten, Ten! Linda (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2009 10:35:00 PM)

    beautiful spiritual piece. i appreciate it! ! God does too (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2009 9:38:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem Louis, It really felt is if you some where between the two world being checked out good work. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2009 9:15:00 PM)

    Wonderful tribute to angels. They represent all that is good, true, and beautiful.
    Lovely work.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 11, 2009



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