Avik Datta Gupta

Bronze Star - 2,390 Points (2nd April 1970 / KOLKATA)

The Artistic Work - Poem by Avik Datta Gupta

Love lingers in your fingers
Like the snow broths of spring
Hauntingly it injures
The sweet pain it brings

Pick your groovy love crayons,
Brush your rainbow shades upon.
The colours of the blushing Sun
Kissed by the rain just for fun!

Capture the world in all it's moods
Touch it with your feelings
It could be bad it could be good
Your feelings will remain your feelings

Topic(s) of this poem: artistic work

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Comments about The Artistic Work by Avik Datta Gupta

  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (11/23/2019 8:37:00 AM)

    A poignant piece of poetry well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched. (Report)Reply

    Avik Datta GuptaAvik Datta Gupta(11/24/2019 10:23:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for liking my poem Chinedu

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  • Jez BurlJez Burl (4/26/2018 6:57:00 PM)

    The artistic work you portrayed here is so much linked to poetry....

    your brush - your pen
    your crayons-your ink
    your canvas-your paper

    All these materials are just materials...it is your hand and your love that will make your thoughts into a concrete being that will symbolize your creativity.

    Wonderful write..10++++++++++ and to my poem list, too.

    Avik Datta GuptaAvik Datta Gupta(4/28/2018 11:36:00 PM)

    Thank You Jez for your overwhelming comment. look forward for you to visit my small world of poems whenever you feel like

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  • Sourav RoySourav Roy (9/27/2017 7:45:00 AM)

    It could be bad it could be goodYour feelings will remain your feelings, you have really said such a true line, everything depends on our mind and mentality; above all 'feelings' are everything, without feeling our life is like falling; your some words have many feelings, and your 'The Artistic Work' speaks about your masterly artistic talent... (Report)Reply

    Avik Datta GuptaAvik Datta Gupta(9/27/2017 8:16:00 AM)

    Thank You Sourav

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  • Sandra Feldman (9/24/2017 7:07:00 AM)

    This is by far one of the very best poem I have ever read.
    I must tell you, every line a gem, on artistic creation. The 'sweet pain of creation', thru love, poetic paradise, you fly high, very high. And how well you present the essential elements of creativity, simply love and feelings. I so agree.! And for the artist his creation 'good or bad, it doesn't matters, will always be true to his feelings, like the parent for his child.
    The poetic richness and imagery borders on the sublime. The more this work is read the more it remains as a precious gift to be remembered and admired. Deeply implanted in the realm of poetic excellence and creativity. I truly think that 'the Artistic Work has never, ever been better presented nor described poetically or otherwise.
    You are certainly gifted.

    Avik Datta GuptaAvik Datta Gupta(9/24/2017 8:28:00 AM)

    Sandtra..your comment is a thousand times better than the lines I scribbled. Sometimes Poetic Evaluations are better than the poetry itself. Your evaluation is an ideal example.I am running out of superlatives to Thank You.Maybe you could help me! !

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (9/21/2017 2:35:00 AM)

    Such a nice poetic work of art... a huge 10+++++ (Report)Reply

    Avik Datta GuptaAvik Datta Gupta(9/21/2017 2:53:00 AM)

    Thank You Mr.Bernanrd for your kind words.Would invite you to read my other poems as well, with the hope that you will like them as well

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (9/21/2017 2:17:00 AM)

    love lingers in finger, good one dear. (Report)Reply

    Avik Datta GuptaAvik Datta Gupta(9/21/2017 2:51:00 AM)

    Thank You Sir..Would invite you to read my other poems as well

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  • Mario, Lucien, Rene OdekerkenMario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken (9/21/2017 1:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Avik
    Thank you for sharing
    Mario Odekerken

    Avik Datta GuptaAvik Datta Gupta(9/21/2017 1:38:00 AM)

    Thank You Mario

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 21, 2017

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