The Bait Poem by Asif Andalib
The Bait
Your sweet gestures are like bait
How long shall I have to wait?
I can hear you sing like a bird
I want to catch you but it's hard
You fly away to another tree
Do you love me is a mystery
I love you but I am afraid
You are like a pretty mermaid
If I say I love you baby
You may disappear in the sea
So I crave and wait for you to say
I love you from the very first day
i had one disappear, wait it won`t be to late, please read my new poem, , , I Wonder joseph
very romantic straight and simple. If I say I love you baby You may disappear in the sea That is very nice
wonderful poem. The analogy between `sweet gestures' and `bait' reminds me metaphysical conceit. The very first line of the poem is really catching.
Its really a nice poem. In fact first our love makes us feel all enthuastic and then leaves alone to weep and cry. Yet its a pleasure.
Dont wait for her to say just say it urself, similes used nicely, good write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 11:56:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
oo..what a great flow of the words. keep it up man.. really like it.. thumbs up...