From the tree when the bark wright
carved me for the expansion
of my self essence into a bark, I
came out of my depth as beauty
emerges from the inside out.Being just
a shape around me, the emptied trunk
caved in as a slough or windless
shape of dust.As
floatability
as my inward secret became fin
itself, I made water as safe
as land and got
the entire ocean and
sky above, to myself, not
as a place to visit
but home itself-
A poem of great depth with a meaningful message. Compelling imagery and beautifully crafted.
A beautiful piece, portraying natures essence. The craft and dexterity in implored in this piece brilliant.
A comforting read Yoonoos, all life is interconnected and dependent on each others survival. Beautiful work.
An impressive poem with a message. An incident in the life of a tree finally compels to see with a broad vision. All the world is a stage is that vision. Great thoughts. To reflect life from the perception of a tree or ocean is the real gift of a poet and you happen to be the one. Impressive indeed.
Rereading this again, I find their are layers that deserve greater reflection, one is always growing and the bark changes. You are a poet philosopher.
A well crafted poem in blank verse. Simply excellent...10++
Such an outstanding piece......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deep sublime muse in abstract fashion. Superb imagery. Kudos. Plz do comment my newest poem too titled, ' pink mania inking'