The Birds(1) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

The Birds(1)

Rating: 4.7


How Cute, the birds fly,
Under the beautiful sky.
How cute, builds the nest,
Where it goes for the rest,
How cute, it makes noise,
Created with beautiful voice.
How cute, creation in nature,
But we need to protect its future.

Thursday, September 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 24 September 2015

''we need to protect its future'' yeah, we should.. but every minute we destroy square kms of land on the planet and fill with poisonous substances air and water.. thousand and thousand of species are endangered.. Yet, too many human beings seem simply deaf and blind.. Thanks for sharing, Vaidyana

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 September 2015

How cute, creation in nature, But we need to protect its future. Verily, a lovely rhyming verse...........10

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Kelly Kurt 24 September 2015

I admire birds (and all of nature) and enjoy watching them. We must protect their habitat and our environment for both our futures. Nicely written, Vaidyana. Thanks. Peace

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How cute is the nature, how cute is the creation.Nature keenly observed and nicely described.10

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Chan Mongol 17 May 2016

A very well folded eloquent with the strong theme of environmental issue. I like all poems with rhythms and rhymes.. Because, I don; t write haiku and I don; t understand but many might and its OK for them. Anyway, thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2020

Beautiful poem nicely crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 December 2019

Lovely poem. Like a beautiful painting..

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2019

Birds, nests, singing, noise. you have powerful perception in you dear poet. thank u. tony

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Sankaran Ayya 06 November 2019

Beautiful lines on birds But we need to protect its future.- - yes it is true concern

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Akhtar Jawad 14 September 2019

Birds make our lives beautiful, a garden of flowers is incomplete without colorful birds. We should protect the birds.

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