The Blue Finch Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

The Blue Finch

Rating: 5.0

The Blue Finch

I find a shrew scary
a dragonfly beautiful, artistic, and elegant
a moth annoying
before you know
there are small holes in your clothes
a butterfly is graceful and beautiful

I have the feeling that Luna comes to visit us daily
she considers our garden her hunting ground
Too bad she's after them
will she have brought the shrews out of the forest?
everything else can be found in our garden

cats are small predators
they kill insects and other small flying creatures
the very last time, she brought me a blue finch,
her teeth in the sweet bird, still half alive,
but the little singer could no longer fly,

at this point, I really do not like Luna
our own black cat Panther
long dead, never killed anything
Luna also battered and tortured this blue finch until it died, really terrible!
I am certainly not happy about this last 'killing'.

©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
21 November 2023

The Blue Finch
Saturday, November 25, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: november,butterfly,cat,cats,hunting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Luna is the cat from the neighbourhood, from her house to ours, she must walk 1,5 Km, if I ever said 1,5 Miles, then it must be 1,5 KM, Luna had chosen our house as her home, I do not really understand WHY, but she insisted to come inside our house BUT she never gets food/eats from me, so that she cannot be permanently in our house. When she has arrived, she started mewing all the time, till we noticed her and let her in, she lets us know that she wants to sleep in our house. Because it was already midnight, can you imagine, before she reaches our house, she has walked 1,5 KM to reach our garden ans then a few ten or hundered meters to reach our door, through which she will be visible for us, otherwise she had to stay all night long outside our house, Luna is a very intelligent cat. I do not know her boss. so far about Luna, the female cat from the neighbourhood. I oftentimes make a free verse about her, because she comes here daily, almost daily, thank you so much for reading and responding and your feedback, heartiest greetings from Sylvia in The Netherlands
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 29 November 2023

So sorry about Luna's killer instincts though! .. Ever so many 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 November 2023

Powerfully and yet beautifully expressed! .. Your sentiment and beautiful respect and love for all nature! .. So awesome! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 29 November 2023

Oh! .. How Heartbreaking! ..

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M. Asim Nehal 28 November 2023

This may not seem like a big deal to us but in reality, it is a matter of the balance of nature. Nice one Madam Sylvia.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 November 2023

Sylvia As my uncle joe would say it is nature TFS Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 November 2023

Indeed, it is nature, but in my own garden, very sad to watch that. Luna did not go to her own house, but she stayed in my garden with the blue finch until the bird really died

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