The Burning Sun - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Burning Sun - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


The sun spits out its
Hot rays on the murky clouds
And goes down below
Runs into the leafy trees
And makes the ice capped rocks cry.


Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 28 February 2023

Runs into the leafy trees...... beautiful....

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Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2023

Tanks for the Tanka. Joyfully beautiful!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 March 2023

The last line. Great imagination Rose Marie

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Anjandev Roy 20 December 2023

Fantastic.....love to read it time and again....

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 March 2023

The melting ice. Beautiful expression

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 March 2023

This tanka has brilliance Rose Marie Bravo! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2023

The sun bringing such beauty and life and meaning! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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The sun who helps every beings to enrich life makes the mountains shed tears. What a destiny!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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