! ! ! The Canopy Of Blue! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! The Canopy Of Blue! ! !

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New morn bestows bliss by the sizzles of rain
the soul overwhelms by the oceanic blue
drizzling splashes the thirst of the sultry night
the mirth within bestirs into the thrust milling deep

the sun awakes sea from the stillness of slumber
sunset glows in deep scarlet red of shindig azure
twilight whispers the passion by the speckles of desire
the starry night bedecks the sky cradling the moon

colors of rainbow fluff up weaving the anchor
breath shimmies into the forest of green
aspiring the glimpse of grace on window of dream
cloud spreads its carpet over the shadow unfazed

the art of love precipitates over the canopy of lips
love of Lilly when intense by the gleams of moon
passion sparkles like eyes of the desire in the hide
swaggering the brims of delight by embrace of the blue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 28 July 2008

nature loving poetic lines......great as always Dr....brought me to haze! ! ! love, heart

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Thad Wilk 28 July 2008

Another gem of a write Dr. Kar! Beaming and radiant, delightful to read indeed! ! ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Rema Prasanna 28 July 2008

beautiful words always dance around you and it is so magical and vivid you place it all in a way readers amaze.....one more brilliant work... you are a great poet.. 10 and more stars Rema

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 August 2008

, , , , , fine poem indeed. I enjoyed it. a 10 with joy!

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 02 August 2008

Dr. Kar, I danced to the music and wonder of this poem...my heart sang! Dorothy 10!

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Raj Nandy 02 December 2009

The colors through their non-verbal modes of communication appeal directly to the human mind! Here the GREEN & BLUE shades calms the mind and rejuvinates the human spirit! 10! -Raj

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BEAU GOLDEN 28 October 2008

I am not easily impressed, and i am impressed.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

Great descriptive poetry. Rarely we see such exquisite imagery........10

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O Anna Niemus 22 August 2008

hundreds of images are born by contemplating your beautiful word art

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Gloria Wekesa 15 August 2008

Great poem celebrating love and nature i love it.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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