Wednesday, April 14, 2021

The Clock And Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you strike every half past an hour
You hit the time showing your power

But time's greater more ignoring you
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Indira Renganathan
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Kingsley Egbukole 01 October 2023

As the clock ticks the time away, it brings everything finally to an end. Even the clock life span expires and it becomes antique. Beautiful poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 October 2023

A brilliant poem dear madam. The last line is the fact

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Deathless, ageless, timeless - the clock continues to tick. Profound philosophy. Thank Ma'm 5 stars

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M Asim Nehal 20 April 2021

Profound poem. Time will fly and clock will remain.5****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 April 2021

Another poem well crafted. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 April 2021

Time never waits on anyone. It moves on further and further.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 April 2021

Very discerning lines on time. Yes, time has its own course.

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