My Loyal Dog Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

My Loyal Dog

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My Dog has won competition in race,
I have learned to run in any place.

He comes to stay by my side in my loneliness,
His look towards me strengths my consciousness.

He wags his tail when seeing me at the gate,
So I've learned to live in the present to forget.

At the beach, he loves catching the ball,
I've learned how easier enjoying the mental.

He doesn't hold grudges even I hit his feeling,
I whistled for him to get back without barking.

At night, I sleep while he stays all night awake,
His difficult task to bite the thief and the snake.

He likes to stick his head out the car window,
He watches the road by his eyes that glow.

My Loyal Dog
Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dog,dogs,friend,loyalty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 29 February 2016

A sweet and simple poem nicely penned on a loyal pet. Beautiful.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 01 March 2016

Thank you Mr.Akhtar for this great comment.

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Valsa George 01 March 2016

A dog is such a loyal companion to man. It loves its master unconditionally. It is great fun to have a dog around while going for walks. A sweet write on a dog you keep! Enjoyed!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 01 March 2016

Thank you Valsa for this great comment.

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Chinedu Dike 13 March 2017

Dog is man's best friend. Unhappy to see it's owner go away and very happy to see the person come back. It's loyalty is second to know. And if you spell it's name backward, it's god! Lovely poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 April 2016

His difficult task. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2016

i wonder, maybe i should have married a dog instead of a woman. would our child be a doman or a humog? i do not own a dog, but i'm sure they bring many 'owners' great satisfaction. a few suggestions: His look towards me strengths my consciousness... strengthens my consciousness and I've learned how easier enjoying the mental............. i don't understand the use fo mental here. also, there are several different forms of the sentence i could suggest, but definitely not the form you have used. and He doesn't hold grudges even I hit his feeling, .........even if (or when) i HURT his feelings? but you have made your point very clear: 'your' dog is a great companion, and a good watch dog at night. bri :)

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Lyn Paul 11 March 2016

Dogs are incredibly loyal and a wonderful companion. Thank you for reminding us the calming magic of a dog.

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Sandra Feldman 08 March 2016

He's Beautiful! What is his name? Very touching poem about the noble and wonderful attributes of dogs and how much we love these faithful creatures. Brought tears to my eyes, I recently lost my wonderful companion, Sandy. My sadness is very great. He was my best friend. Thank you for this beautiful work.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 09 March 2016

Thank you Sandra for reading. I'm so sorry about your Dog Sandy.

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