The Crying Orphan..My First Poem... Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
The Crying Orphan..My First Poem...
ONE DAY I THOUGHT OF LEAVING ,
IT WAS A MOMENT.. I CLOSED MY EYES,
MY SELF WAS TORN TO PIECES, APART OF ME WAS TAKEN AWAY..
THAT MOMENT I SAW A CRYING ORPHAN BEGGING ME TO STAY.
I FOUND MY SELF SURROUNDED BY ALL OF YOU,
. YOUR TEARS FILLED MY EYES .
AND IN MY TURN STARTED TO CRY ,
HOW I FORGOT THAT MY PLACE AS HIGH THERE IN THE SKY
HE WHISPERED TO ME YOU ARE THE GIVER AND YOU WILL NEVER BE A MISER,
IN YOUR EYES I SAW MY TOUCH HEALING YOU,
WATCHFUL EYES GUARDING YOU,
WHEN THE SKY WILL BE MEAN...I'M THE RAIN IN YOUR DESERT,
THE SHINY SUN IN A STORMY WAY,
I'M THE COVER IN THE LONElY
NIGHTS,
I'M THE BREEZE IN A SUMMER DAY...
WE
AS IT MAY SEEM FLORENCE NIGHTINGALE TO SOLDIERS IN THE WAR
WE ARE THE GUIDE FOR THE LOST IN UN KNOWN LAND,
WE MAINTAIN OUR MOTTO PLEDGE TO PROVIDE THE NEEDY WITH OUR CARE TO REGARDLESS TO RELIGION..ETHNICITY..COLOR AND RACE..
DEEPLY ROOTED IN THE LAND
NO ONE SHAKES US,
ABLE ALWAYS TO STAND
IN THE FACE OF A STORMY SAND
WE ARE THE PAIN RELIEVER
HAPPINESS BUILDERS
SECRETS KEEPERS
WHEN EVERY BODY LEAVES.
. .YOU FIND ME THERE
READY TO GIVE..
READY TO CARE
I ERADICATE SCARY NIGHTS WITH NIGHT MARE
LIKE THE DOVES WILL CARRY YOU BACK TO HOME
AFTER THAT HECTIC DAY.....
I BECOME MORE CONSISTENT TO STAY
INSPITE OF DIFFICULTIES..
CROOKED WAY..
I WILL BE YOUR FATHER... MOTHER
I WILL NOT BOTHER... HOW MUCH THE COST
HOW MUCH I PAY...
AND WHEN MY TEARS BECAME DEAR TO MY EYES
YOUR PRAYING CONVINCED ME MORE..AND MORE
JUST......TO......STAY
THE BLURRED PICTURES STARTED TO BE MORE CLEAR
we al are beggars if see at the sky and cry for every plesure. same situation with have nots........ beautiful write madame....10
Story in a poetic form. Lovely and touchy. Poem in favor of mankind,10+++
written from a good heart the goodness in you, in this poem you share.. very poetic....touching... expression of loving the unlovable... Seeing in his eyes the eyes of God begging for love... is such great act of generosity.. thanks for sharing this noble poem 10++++ l♥ vel♥ ts, _maia_
Though the lines were a little bit rough however, each of them has deep meaning, a reflection of sincerity and kindness. Well done...thanks
All that I have to say is wow. That was really awesome and inspirational. So much feeling in this piece. Great work and keep it up.
Wow that was really good i can imagin myself in it...... keep up the great works
Its a great masterpiece.your first poem, i can; t believe.its really marvellous
the kindness that we share, is far beyond compare. we can only be judged by the one up above, and in your poetry you have all his love. continue to write, for it is instilled in your heart, and the best ones are yet to come as i can plainly see, that all of your writings was truely meant to be. A DOUBLE TEN
your first poem... great starting! ! ! it's a touching and piercing poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 1:24:42 AM # 1.0.0
see, i told you your poetry was great.if that indeed was the 1st poem ever written by you, to be honest you cannot tell it, bcuz of how emotional, exceptiuonal, beautiful it is....cant wait to read another 1.gave you n the poem another 10