The Crying Orphan..My First Poem... Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

The Crying Orphan..My First Poem...

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ONE DAY I THOUGHT OF LEAVING ,
IT WAS A MOMENT.. I CLOSED MY EYES,
MY SELF WAS TORN TO PIECES, APART OF ME WAS TAKEN AWAY..
THAT MOMENT I SAW A CRYING ORPHAN BEGGING ME TO STAY.
I FOUND MY SELF SURROUNDED BY ALL OF YOU,
. YOUR TEARS FILLED MY EYES .
AND IN MY TURN STARTED TO CRY ,
HOW I FORGOT THAT MY PLACE AS HIGH THERE IN THE SKY
HE WHISPERED TO ME YOU ARE THE GIVER AND YOU WILL NEVER BE A MISER,

IN YOUR EYES I SAW MY TOUCH HEALING YOU,

WATCHFUL EYES GUARDING YOU,

WHEN THE SKY WILL BE MEAN...I'M THE RAIN IN YOUR DESERT,

THE SHINY SUN IN A STORMY WAY,

I'M THE COVER IN THE LONElY

NIGHTS,

I'M THE BREEZE IN A SUMMER DAY...

WE

AS IT MAY SEEM FLORENCE NIGHTINGALE TO SOLDIERS IN THE WAR



WE ARE THE GUIDE FOR THE LOST IN UN KNOWN LAND,
WE MAINTAIN OUR MOTTO PLEDGE TO PROVIDE THE NEEDY WITH OUR CARE TO REGARDLESS TO RELIGION..ETHNICITY..COLOR AND RACE..
DEEPLY ROOTED IN THE LAND
NO ONE SHAKES US,
ABLE ALWAYS TO STAND
IN THE FACE OF A STORMY SAND
WE ARE THE PAIN RELIEVER
HAPPINESS BUILDERS
SECRETS KEEPERS
WHEN EVERY BODY LEAVES.
. .YOU FIND ME THERE
READY TO GIVE..

READY TO CARE

I ERADICATE SCARY NIGHTS WITH NIGHT MARE

LIKE THE DOVES WILL CARRY YOU BACK TO HOME

AFTER THAT HECTIC DAY.....

I BECOME MORE CONSISTENT TO STAY

INSPITE OF DIFFICULTIES..

CROOKED WAY..

I WILL BE YOUR FATHER... MOTHER

I WILL NOT BOTHER... HOW MUCH THE COST

HOW MUCH I PAY...

AND WHEN MY TEARS BECAME DEAR TO MY EYES
YOUR PRAYING CONVINCED ME MORE..AND MORE

JUST......TO......STAY

THE BLURRED PICTURES STARTED TO BE MORE CLEAR

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A POEM WHICH WAS WRITTEN FOR A TRUE STORY IT IS FOR A CHILD, A WOMAN OR A MAN... FOR A NEEDY ONE.. THAT ORPHAN..AN OLD ONE or A NEW BORN MAY BE..

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Anjali Sinha 27 May 2009

another great one from you and haan the pictures are getting less blurred now ++++10 anjali

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Saadat Tahir 30 May 2009

tamara dear...hi we poets are strange creatures we cherish our first poetic effort as a first born...rememebering it with tender care...and a softness especillt resrved..but honest you did a marvelous job its so touchy and full of emotion...it gushes to your head in amoment of heady philanthropy...but it is a special caring feelin heart that can see think and talk like that beautiful poem beautiful person i may offer only ten cheers

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

this is very beautiful.a poem with a touch of love to real orphans....grace

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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2009

a poetic story, kindness based intentions, fantasy which has reality touching effects... all this sweet poem shows that you are much kind herted and feel whats going around you and you try to be a part of... well done dear friend for this sweet and lovely poem...i liked it very much and appreciate you for reality related poetry and touchy issues to raise in poems... well done 10 +++++

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Benjamin Hallas 29 October 2009

All that I have to say is wow. That was really awesome and inspirational. So much feeling in this piece. Great work and keep it up.

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Fatmata Alpha 29 October 2009

Wow that was really good i can imagin myself in it...... keep up the great works

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Gautam Sharma 15 October 2009

Its a great masterpiece.your first poem, i can; t believe.its really marvellous

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Louis Rams 22 August 2009

the kindness that we share, is far beyond compare. we can only be judged by the one up above, and in your poetry you have all his love. continue to write, for it is instilled in your heart, and the best ones are yet to come as i can plainly see, that all of your writings was truely meant to be. A DOUBLE TEN

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Allan Macli Borges 15 June 2009

your first poem... great starting! ! ! it's a touching and piercing poem.

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