The Delicate Number Nine Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

The Delicate Number Nine

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The Delicate Number Nine

I like Nine the most
or maybe Ten?
that associates me with the Ten Commandments
I prefer Nine
Settled myself under the Ten
then I will constantly look up above
look at the Ten Commandments

©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Wednesday,13 March 2024.

Wednesday, March 13, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: rights
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
FINALLY I can publish this poem on Poem Hunter Poem Site, earlier not, I had the biggest problems in submittng a WHOLE POEM, when I publish my poem is divided in crazy compositions, then without the title or without the end of the submitting and finally WITHOUT THE TOOLS TO PUBLISH, so there were no Send Buttons, I never knew what's missing here, but I have tried till my new poem is pubished/posted, thank you for reading this, best regards, Sylvia Frances Chan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 March 2024

It is always better to stand one step down - below ten- so that you can look up, strive and move towards perfection.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 March 2024

I too love the number nine. It is a multiple of three and most auspicious and lucky too.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 March 2024

Hello my dear friend Sylvia, After many days, i am a reading a poem in Poem Hunter. Your poem is the first one. And i am so happy about it. That you were able to publish the poem is great.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2024

Thank you for sharing this poem, my friend. A very timely write for this lenten season.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2024

Most of us like number nine because it is the last single digit and it symbolizes completion, perfection and spiritual enlightenment. It is rich with positive energy. Moreover, there is always that saying that number nine is a lucky number.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2024

A very, very clever write. A great way to emphasize the importance of the Ten Commandments representing the moral and ethical principles guiding human conduct. Liked how the great Poetess had woven this impressive, powerful and thought provoking poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2024

Move on. Keep posting such beautiful poems. Thanks.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 March 2024

To be able to follow the 'Ten Commandments' should be the goal in life. Lovely and Thoughtful. Full Ten and to my favourite

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