The Firing Avalance Poem by Catrina Heart

The Firing Avalance

Rating: 3.1


couldn't conquer I
perhaps
eyes were set to fire
iron heart revitalized
to breathe again
after
the firing avalanche



11th of December,2009

Friday, December 11, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: fire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 11 December 2009

Very nicely composed short poem. Lovely.

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Dinesh Mukherji 11 December 2009

fantastic catrina, an avalanche fired and perfect write.

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Carol Gall 11 December 2009

short but really good 10

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Eyan Desir 11 December 2009

You show full control over your work..... You're great....

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Ramesh T A 11 December 2009

Rage of human enmity excels even fire and iron strength sometimes!

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