The Eternal Flame Poem by Dave Alan Walker

The Eternal Flame

Rating: 4.9


We are fires
of the eternal flame
burning bright
from one life to the next

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 19 September 2013

Soul is the essence of life, its flame keeps on burning!

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Heather Wilkins 19 September 2013

excellent Dave. Much said in a few words.

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Heather Wilkins 19 September 2013

excellent Dave. Much said in a few words.

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Noreen Carden 20 September 2013

Hello Dave beautiful poem and great message well done

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Marieta Maglas 20 September 2013

The eternal flame is God (He revealed Himself to Moses) -great poem

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Ramesh Rai 09 November 2013

life is a journey n after comletion of this journey we have to enter into another. a great philosophical write

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Ramesh Rai 09 November 2013

life is a journey n after comletion of this journey we have to enter into another. a great philosophical write

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Smoky Hoss 25 October 2013

Right to the point! And so well done. Very good.

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Joe Breunig 15 October 2013

An enjoyable snippet; loved the concept, but wished you had further explored the depths of it; it left me wanting much more of your perspective, instead of forcing me to fill in the blanks. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Vera Sidhwa 30 September 2013

And burning bright eternally in it's everlasting glow. Great poem Dave

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