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The Eternal Flame

Rating: 4.9

We are fires
of the eternal flame
burning bright
from one life to the next

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 September 2013

Eternal soul burns its way.

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David Wood 21 September 2013

Short but sweet and true. Well done Dave.

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Dinesan Madathil 20 September 2013

This is the most beautiful short time I have read of late, Mr Dave Alan.Thanks for sharing.

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2013

oh how I agree with those few words. From one life to another nice thoughts

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Joseph Anderson 20 September 2013

Profound and ever true, thus our immortality. Brief and brilliant

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Ramesh Rai 09 November 2013

life is a journey n after comletion of this journey we have to enter into another. a great philosophical write

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Ramesh Rai 09 November 2013

life is a journey n after comletion of this journey we have to enter into another. a great philosophical write

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Smoky Hoss 25 October 2013

Right to the point! And so well done. Very good.

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Joe Breunig 15 October 2013

An enjoyable snippet; loved the concept, but wished you had further explored the depths of it; it left me wanting much more of your perspective, instead of forcing me to fill in the blanks. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Vera Sidhwa 30 September 2013

And burning bright eternally in it's everlasting glow. Great poem Dave

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