Mohammad Muzzammil

Rookie - 389 Points (2nd July,1986 / Bahraich, India)

The Fate Of Love - Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

The sky is limitless dome,
All the planets are jewells,
The night looks pretty home,
There is beauty where love dwells,
But, eagle always hunts the dove,
The beauty is free but not love.

God's made men but not caste,
They've themselves erected walls,
In the courtyard of human, that would be vast,
So, poor love strives flying but falls,
The society's made among us destinition,
The caste is the obstacle in love's destination.

I know not what the pain,
Or what to say that I feel,
All my efforts may go in vain,
If my compulsion doesn't let me reveal,
My love and intention to the mother of hers,
In her separation, I only compose my song verse.

Comments about The Fate Of Love by Mohammad Muzzammil

  • (4/18/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    A really great poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/4/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    Nicely written, Muzzammil. You have assessed the situation very well. Great poem. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    It is nicely written.Personally, I believe that love hasn't walls, barriers, castes and so on.Love is free and heart can feel what it wishes itself.Sometimes the heart will never get this right answer, however still it is worth to feel. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (4/4/2012 4:34:00 AM)

    '' Or what to say that I feel,
    All my efforts may go in vain, ''

    your efforts will not go in vain! i am here to value the song or the verse of you and shall strive to spread the message among the masses.....................
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 3, 2012

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