The First Moon Poem by Preetam Shetty
The First Moon
Amidst the shadow of night,
It came like a boon,
Two pairs of excited eyes,
Gazing at their first moon.
In the start there was a shy,
And a pinch of unknown fear,
Both hearts were pounding,
The moment seemed queer.
Soon came the touch,
Accompanied by cold shiver,
Silence in the environ echoed,
Chuckle of a flowing river.
Eyes were still shut,
As a lip tasted the lip,
The bodies soon curled,
Each others grip.
Desires were unbearable,
Ecstasy was getting higher,
Boundaries got diminished,
So did the earthly attire.
The aroma of dripping sweat,
Aroused the scent of air,
Moans sounded soothing music,
Experience was rare.
Landscapes were explored,
Mysteries continued to reveal,
Emotion kept flooding,
Impossible to conceal.
Gradually the earths slumbered,
Inner souls began to unite,
Smilingly the moon slithered,
The dawn embraced the night.
Kudakwashe Roak Mutama said it best it appealled to our imagination and had me begging for more. I wanted to know or better yet needed to know what was going to happen next. You are a great poet and this poem is a 10 hands down.
A romantic lyric, a lovely moon-lit 'Sexperience' Virgin lover's, first playful encounter 'Moans Sounded Soothing Music' 'Harmonious beats of two Hearts'/ 'Smilingly the moon slithered, The dawn embraced the night' Revealed; The Universal Romance of - 'Love's Omnipresence' Note; Your work, Preetam is well expressed Less rhyme to distract the poet's own 'Beat'. Sensitive readers may then listen with 'Heart' and join in the Spectacular Orgasm. (As 'eye' have) :) Note; My early writing were all Rhyme and Lyrical like. I was advised by another poet I greatly admired to express with prose, spontaneously. Many rhymes then self generated without a delayed thought as to what's best Good Work, Excellent Metaphor Keep Writing! ...louie
Its beautiful........ something different to read. Great flow of words............
a vivid description, really engaging. Throws the reader into the poem, which is the purpose of poetry. Good read, keep it up
The beauty of sensuality has been very well crafted in the poem. Simple words, but wonderful expressions.10 on 10 to 'The First Moon'...
10+ by far this poem is your best.Everything is corresponding with beauty and emotions and sensations. You have really built up a lovely episode...Thanks for inviting.
You have well expressed the feelings through personification! Voted 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 10:37:30 AM # 1.0.0
Well crafted. So much said without saying.