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The Forbidden Dream

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the dream…Waves rush to shore
as your hips sway with glee
into the tides, heap the rhythm
darling..Swing me gently...

cast your spell on the sand
gather your magical moves on stones
sway me against the fire
of sweetened droplets of the morn...
the reverie…as I move tiptoed
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Eyan Desir 24 May 2010
Very poetic and very well express...10
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this has a cinematic and poetic appeal or something like that... nice write!
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John Knight 19 May 2010
Naidz - Angel - I love this poem it is BEAUTIFUL. Dream Love is wonderful and enables us to live out our love in Blissful Dreamtime. The sea & shore is a very emotional venue (it is the rhythm of the sea that stirs the heart and soul) . There is a misunderstood magic in LOVE and we can never fully describe it - but we feel it. Love in the Sea with the slipperyness (lovely word) and salty taste of the sae water ameliorates (good word) the sensation of love. Dancing and kissing throughout the night and all day - AWESOME. Whispers and touch - these are the eleements of trus and wonderful love. Thank you for caring and sharing - Love through poetry - JOHN.
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Oh! What a dream Grace! The love unending, the tie never to be torn. But how did you come out of the trance ! ! Just to communicate with the readers! ! Thank you much. It is the difference of a poets conscious with the general. Write more and give us some more dreams to live with joy in such surroundings of dirt and cruelty. 10+ Apoet Bangla
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