ramesh rai

Gold Star - 26,493 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

The Great War - Poem by ramesh rai

The great war
a fantasy in daily life
from dawn to dusk
congenial to implication in every one's life
a lot of blood are shed
in the form of sweat
with the toil for survival of livelihood
the great conqueror wins the great war
with full discipline, devotion and sincerity
throughout the day

You can judge yourself
if you are winner or looser
to win this war
you need not to shed blood of other
your soul is the only diplomat
you ask your soul
if you have dishearten any one
you ask your soul
if you have cheated any
in any means
nay, not so
you are winner otherwise looser

your creative mind is the identity
to win the great war.

Comments about The Great War by ramesh rai

  • (4/23/2012 11:13:00 PM)

    Evil triumphs in many situations but it is always proved in the history that good wins! Let us deeat evil from taking pain and inspiration from this great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/20/2012 11:36:00 AM)

    A really fantastic poem, a truly fantastic poem.
    Great work.
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  • Unwritten Soul (4/20/2012 7:28:00 AM)

    The great war is the war that everybody as an army...We have a battlefield without blood on the ground but the future as a reward or to sacrifice...We are the army to fight our life to be better, It is a great war that unseen and it can kills many without a weapon but by own weak strength...we can be strong physically but not guarantee to win mentally, In this great war it is difficult, but to survive we need self empowerment to find victory...but In this great war we need to help companies to win as a team individually...Even children included in this war...for their future, and women too...just look at that pregnant mothers, have a double great war for themself and for the children...In this war no one is an enemy but self and humanity damages...Nice write Sir Ramesh, full of inspiration and hope i love it very much! ! ! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    beautiful , , really beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/20/2012 5:33:00 AM)

    Nice write. Only our creative mind can make us win the battle of life.Very true1 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 19, 2012

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