The Holy Man Poem by Dave Alan Walker

The Holy Man

Rating: 4.6


As we all kill
and destroy everything
around us
The holy man follows
the righteous path

With the ashes
and the souls
The loves and the lives
of the people
on a new path

Let him show
us all the way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madhuparna Chakraborty 14 March 2012

Impressive poem....laconic in someway yet beautiful

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Chime Justice Ndubuisi 13 March 2012

Religiously motivating! I think am liking this. Nice one.

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Thaddeus Dugan 12 March 2012

I like it is genuine

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Young Church Poetry 12 March 2012

Let him show us all the way amazing line indeed. Great poem Sir, if all could listen to The Holy Man everything would be so perfect.

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Rupa Gogoi 12 March 2012

There's a holy man in every human...liked it!

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Osama Waqar 18 July 2012

just wonderful......... nothing less than a fantastic blessing are you on this earth

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Kevin Patrick 21 March 2012

What amazing is the amount you can say in such few words, its an eloquent piece, that as an agnostic I admire. Bravo

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Duke Perry Abrokwa 20 March 2012

dat's rite, girt wrk u are a girt poet.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2012

Let him show us all the way /// i love your noble feelings.. beautiful write...10

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Ankur Chauhan 16 March 2012

nice words alan... i liked it i would like to invite you to read my poem the friendship tree.

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