As we all kill
and destroy everything
around us
The holy man follows
the righteous path
With the ashes
and the souls
The loves and the lives
of the people
on a new path
Let him show
us all the way
Religiously motivating! I think am liking this. Nice one.
Let him show us all the way amazing line indeed. Great poem Sir, if all could listen to The Holy Man everything would be so perfect.
just wonderful......... nothing less than a fantastic blessing are you on this earth
What amazing is the amount you can say in such few words, its an eloquent piece, that as an agnostic I admire. Bravo
Let him show us all the way /// i love your noble feelings.. beautiful write...10
nice words alan... i liked it i would like to invite you to read my poem the friendship tree.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Impressive poem....laconic in someway yet beautiful