The Hug Poem by Ruby Honeytip

The Hug

Rating: 5.0


Sillhouetted branches
At the top of apple trees
Stretch to kiss the last of the light
A full moon ascends
Casts out femine hands
As she smilingly heralds the night.
He pulls me toward him
Like the moon and the tide
I move close and he holds me tight.
I feel him flow under my hands
Heat emanates out
My desires flames ignite.
He kisses my cheek
Gentle friendly ease
Another pang from love no requite
Dammit! If I just turned an inch
And kissed his lips
Would he think me impolite?
Or would he suddenly realise
I hold true loves kiss
And let his hidden passion take flight?
What does all of this matter
If only one of us knows
And I will never take the first bite?

Just let it fall.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
© 2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 July 2013

Beautiful! Just let it fall! But sometimes unknowingly you may take the first bite, that would be real intense!

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Aria Siren 23 July 2013

Your power to transport me right into the middle of your poems is uncanny. Lush poem, beautiful backdrop, and love the last line.

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..... W@king Up..... 07 July 2013

Awesome poem Ruby? How do you do it? I love it how in almost every poem you write a line all alone at the finish :)

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